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As some of you know, I've been working on robotech fan project. Much of the designs and web site are finished, but not completely. The story is called Atlantech, or (code name Robotech 4000). Why not just Robotech 4000 you ask? Well because in this time and age, Robotechnology has lost its value, because of a brand new type of technology that's been developed and founded in the futuristic city of Atlantis.
But despite the fact it has a different title, it still remains true to the Robotech story-line, and the same elements apply. Even some of the new characters are descendants from Robotech characters, like William and Alley Sterling. Of course there are others, but I'm not going to reveal them, in fact I find it fun to leave readers guessing.
The story takes place in the year 4000, and why not 3000? Because it's already been done, but never finished, just like many other robotech projects.
Unlike the usual fan fiction, I decided to create my own universe and unique characters, because what better way to tell a story than to be able to create your own world for it? Sure it's fun writing stories about your favorite characters, but it just feels more rewarding coming up with your own.
Before the development of the characters, I wanted a setting that would not only be futuristic, but unlike anything seen in the RT universe. For the idea I thought to myself, what would a city in that time period look like? Then it came to me while browsing through pictures of Las Vegas, why not a city of neon lights, and super advanced technology? A city as large as New York City, but with the appearance of Las Vegas. I got even more ideas, when deciding on the location of such a city. It would have to be located somewhere deep in space, far from the sun and earth, because it is literally, the city that never sleeps, because it never sees daylight.
Next came the proposal of its exact location, it couldn't just be drifting in space could it? It would have to be supported by something. Of course at the same time I was coming up with the idea of what would be called the "Zergyx". Which can be defined as a secret ancient alien weapon, with the same value the SDF-1. The story line that fits around the proposed weapon, described it as being launched and sent away from its planet of origin, but remaining encased in its shell, which is a chunk of that planet. And so to make the storyline even more interesting, I decided the location of the city would have to be the shell of the zergyx, but no one would know the weapon system was buried deep within it.
Doing it this way, would also help with the introduction of an ancient race of aliens, called the Zyrians. (Ancient ancestors of the zentraedi). Because their main leader is obsessed with obtaining the zergyx and when he finally discovers its location, he is angered and starts to believe the population of Atlantis City are keeping it for themselves.
But of course the aliens are one of the main villains, but so are some of the very people of Atlantis city, which are also it's founders, The city council. Why would a city council fall into the category of villainy you ask? Well, because they are a group of greedy middle aged men, who have complete control over everything in the city, except the military which is what angers them. The head council man, Julius Morane is the real problem, especially because of all the crime that takes place behind the backs of the civilians. He lies and steals from the people, and they don't know about it, but if they ever find out, they are either bribed with money to keep their mouths shut or if they refuse, they are killed.
The council still try to take control over the military, they even fund it's supplies and the top secret mecha, but still the Admiral refuses to hand that power over to them, because he's known Julius for a long time and also knows he's up to no good. Captain Abraham Grant, and the city council, have a long history of hatred towards one another, and it all started in the early development of the city, when Grant was running for the position of Mayor, and Julius saw to it, that he would lose the election. So after losing, Grant joined the military and earned the rank of admiral, just to spite his foe. Grant knew that the council wanted control over the AMF, and he knew that joining meant they no longer had control over him.
But sadly that didn't stop the council, in fact they decided to insert a spy amongst the AMF, and not just any spy, but a robot disguised as a human, which would be known as Stan Winston. Using a holographic overlay similar to that of the android Janice, Stan would be able to walk amongst the soldiers and personnel of the AMF, secretly recording everything that took place.
But of course acting as a spy wasn't the only purpose of the android, he was also in charge of keeping the councils secrets private, and eliminating anyone who knew anything about it.
what better killer than an android? He could take care of the council's dirty work, without ever being caught. Leaving behind no trace of evidence, making the murders look like accidents or acts of suicide. In a sense, he is in fact the perfect killing machine, but still harbors a personality all his own. And rumor has it, that he was created by using the remains of a computer, combined with actual memories of a human being.
In fact, that human was the actual son of Julius, that had died due to an incurable cancer many years ago. Julius refused to let his son die, and so he had his memories wiped from his brain and transferred into the body of an android. But of course this only a rumor, there is no actual proof that this occurred, as the robot does not act like his son, or in any way, react to such memories and so Stan's true origins remain nothing more than a mystery.
Characters and descriptions
Creating your own characters is always a fun experience, because you can do so much with them, there are no limitations, but it is important to make them realistic. Because no one likes to read about a Mary sue.
the first and main character of the story is eighteen year old Brian Smith. He is an unusual character, because of a terrible depression he faces, that was caused by the loss of his older brother, Robert. Robert had joined the AMF and became a test pilot, and everything had been fine until one night he never returned home, and all Brian had heard was that he was killed due to a malfunction of one of the fighter planes. At the time, Brian was only eleven years old, and his dreams were shattered because his brother had been his role model, but after losing him Brian felt like he lost everything. Also spawned, Brian's hatred towards the military, (Lynn Kyle comes to mind) He blamed them for what happened to his brother and swore he would never join their forces, no matter what. Sadly Brian dug himself into a hole, where he refused to talk to anyone, or try to make friends, but he did still attend public attractions, mainly night clubs and a local bar called The Card Shack; where poker games were held, as he likes to listen to the music and watch people gamble.
However, he does finally meet a friend, who turns out to be none other than William sterling. And they meet at the card shack during one of the live performances by a famous prima-donna, Victoria Thompson. Brian also meets Stan Winston, but they don't seem to like one another, and Brian finds it odd that Stan has a striking resemblance to his dead brother.
Moving on, the second main character is William sterling, and yes he is related to Max and Miriya. He's older than Brian by a couple of years, and also a soldier of the AMF, which Brian doesn't seem to hold against him when they meet. He is ranked as a corporal, but surprising enough, isn't the best pilot on the forces as expected to be. Someone much younger and unexpected is, and that would be Justin Church. Being that William doesn't live up to the sterling name, he is still a great pilot and proud of himself. Personality wise, he is very sentimental, humorous, and charming (gets it from max)
Miss Victoria Thompson is the object of his affection, and he acts as her secret admirer by leaving vases of roses anonymously at her dressing room door. He also tries to get her attention often, by making eye contact and showing up for big events where she attends, one in particular a poker tournament. He knows she's fond of watching such games, and so he tries to win her over by playing against the champs. He is, how shall I put this? A hopeless romantic, but lady luck does indeed pay him a visit.
Next character, none other than Stan Winston, the android in disguise. Ever since he was inserted into the AMF, he started tagging along with William sterling, and for some reason, became attached to him. Being that Stan's true nature is to act as a spy and a killer, it's strange that he would establish any humane bond with anyone, especially an enemy of the council. But Stan has become William's best friend, and fears him ever finding out the truth of what he really is. However, upon meeting Brian, Stan instantly sees him as a threat, and plans to deal with him later on.
Moving on to the next character, we have the vamp and diva, Victoria Thompson. She's not your average blonde, she is full of character and plenty of sass. But the most unique thing about this character is her 1920's look. As a long time fancier of old styles, she favors the jazz age the most, and tries to make it her own style. She is one of the most popular icons in Atlantis city, only second to another diva, Natoya Stronghold, but she knows more about what goes on in the city than anyone else. She knows everything because she used to have an affair with Julius, but since it ended, that still didn't stop him from exploiting her to make money or end his obsession with her for that matter. She was bribed into getting anything she wanted, if she only remained silent, and she agreed. Working as an actress for silent films and also a musical career, she has hopes in saving up to buy her own pub and call it Gatsby after her favorite book. But despite her fame and success, she still feels lonely as she tells her manager often, and drinks to fill that void. She also wonders who keeps leaving her roses, and why they never come forward, as a matter of fact she tries to find out who that secret admirer is.
Second Part
Continued...
The next character on the list is Justin Church. He is by far one of the youngest soldiers in the AMF, but also one of the best pilots. His amazing skills even bypass corporal William Sterling's, which is very impressive if one might say. But young Justin also has another side to him, he's much more interested in science than the military, and in fact the only reason he had joined is because he wanted to make his father proud. Justin's father knew of his love for knowledge, but insisted that he join the military to make something of his life.
Without arguing, Justin had accepted his father's wishes and set out to fulfill his dream, but that didn't stop the young man from doing what he loved.
The AMF had a secret lab of their own, and without his father knowing, Justin also begun working with other scientists.
I guess you could say Justin's true role model was none other than Emil Lang, and he strives to become a brilliant scientist one day. But aside from his hobbies, he is pretty much a normal young man, who enjoys the company of William and Brian. But the only problem is he believes there is a scientific explanation for everything, especially when Brian begins having reoccurring nightmares and visions. Justin assumes that is nothing but a psychological problem, without considering that it might be something more than that. Justin is also the first person to suspect Stan Winston of abnormalities, as he starts watching him closely, observing his behavior.
One of the main reasons for his suspicions, is because he actually discovers something odd, a small drop of fluid left behind on a table, where Stan had been sitting.
Next character is Lynne Williams, a tough redhead and strict commander. Only ranked second under the command of Admiral Grant, Lynne proves herself worthy, by taking her missions seriously. She is the type of commander, who will not put up with insubordination or any jokes for that matter. Being a woman, she knows the men really have no respect towards her authority, therefore she usually beats them in hand-to-hand combat, which embarrasses them greatly. She also has to deal with the bridge crew, who don't normally take their positions seriously and tend to gossip or fool around. But aside from her toughness, there is a softer caring side to the female officer, a side many don't often see. She has a strong relationship with captain Grant, a kind of a father/daughter bond. She is also good friends with William sterling and Justin, but sees Brian as being a weak individual with no motivation.
Like Justin, she also begins getting suspicious of Stan, especially when she catches him in her office without her permission.
moving on, the next character is Captain Abraham Grant. I've already explained how he got to where he is now, but what I haven't talked about is what he's like as a person.
He isn't as tough or strict as Lynne, but he does commend her for that, instead he actually tolerates what she doesn't, which is something she often questions. But he believes that every person is quite capable of realizing their mistakes and disciplining themselves. But of course that doesn't mean he won't give them a fair warning, because he knows a lot of the soldiers don't take it seriously, only because they do not see war......yet.
Grant also faces the everyday ridicule by head council man, Julius Morane, but no matter what the man says, Grant knows deep inside he's just angry because he doesn't get the same amount of respect, but then again who would respect a liar?
Other characters
Julius Morane - Doesn't often make an appearance but his word is law, if living in the city of Atlantis. He and the rest of the council own and control everything except the AMF which had been around long before their council was founded. The AMF is something Julius wishes to gain control of, but unfortunately he can't as long as Grant is in charge. However, when Julius and the council are seen, their faces are hidden in the shadows, but no one knows why.
Maxwell Graham - He is mostly known for his position of being Victoria's manager, but is also involved in other businesses. He is usually seen at the card shack, where he hosts many of the games, and is even said to be a cheater.
Natoya Stronghold - Yet another diva of Atlantis city, and by far the most popular, out of the thousands of artists that reside there. She is much older than Victoria, and has her own unique style, which is very up to date with their times. Her hair is naturally brunette, but she wears a short styled violet wig as her trademark. Another unique feature about the woman is her french accent, which many fan's seem to adore. It was even said, that Natoya was the artist that inspired Victoria in the first place.
Alley Sterling - The blonde younger sister of William Sterling, and one of the bridge officers of the AMF. She stands out from the rest as being grumpy, sarcastic and careless, but she does take her job seriously and has a lot of respect for Lynne.
That covers most of the characters of Atlantis City, now moving onto the aliens.
Part III
As I've said before, the Zyrians are an ancient race, dating back to the times of ancient Egypt on planet earth. They are what you might call Space Pirates, simply because after conquering/ destroying their enemies they steal anything they deem valuable such as gold or jewels. They even wear some of these treasures as a symbol of honor. Out of everything they've ever discovered in the universe, gold is the most valuable in their culture and they wear necklaces and earrings made out of it. Most of the gold they have was actually given to them by the ancient Egyptians, when they came upon earth by mistake.
The leader and ruler of the Zyrians, Zoal was worshipped as a god, in fact the entire race were thought to be god like beings, sent from above to help them.
At first Zoal had intentions of slaying the humans, but being that they bowed before him, he decided against it. He would wait until he had gotten everything he wanted from them, and then he would kill them all. Zoal's brother Krotez was against him, and tried to persuade him to leave the humans alone, but all Zoal could see was his brother acting like a traitor. The warlord had respect for his sibling, but still never got over the anger, and to make things worse his brother asked for permission to stay on earth. Careless, Zoal granted his brother's foolish request and watched as he became a pharaoh and started living a mortal life.
The Zyrians are immortal beings, but only by accident, you see long ago they discovered an herb and they heard it was said to have special powers, but those powers were never revealed.
The herb was ground up into a liquid where Zoal and his people drank it, but they never experienced anything powerful about the substance. Then Zoal was led to believe it had been nothing more than lies and he ordered to have the aliens of that planet, eliminated.
But as the years passed, Zoal and his people began to notice they hadn't aged in a long time. Zoal's second commander and personal advisor, Bhor had also been an expert on all things in the universe and it was he who discovered the drink had actually stopped the aging process, thus making them immortal beings.
Aside from being worshipped, the zyrians also had their own god like figure they believed was responsible for all their victories and anything else rewarding. Zoal was the one who started this bizarre act of religion, and it happened long ago during the invasion of a small distant planet. The warlord had fallen, nearly facing defeat when suddenly he heard a voice in his head and it caused him to go insane, and he killed everyone in his way, even his own people. He claimed this voice he heard, to be the voice of their god, and he called it Hauruta, which means victory in the zyrianic language.
It wasn't long before this religion became so popular, that they even built a temple in the god's honor on their home planet.
The temple was made out of the rest of the gold, they had stolen from earth, and the inside was decorated with treasures taken from all across the universe.
The temple was also sacred, and very few could enter it unless granted permission by Zoal.
After the birth of such a god, the entire race began to wear war paint (eyeliner) around their eyes. They had actually gotten the idea from coming into contact with the Egyptians, but only wore it due to the fact it made them look more terrifying to their enemies, which would be the robotech masters, when they were first discovered.
At the time they were discovered, the masters were looking for an alien race to help them in a fight against an alien race known as the invid and also help them obtain some unknown plants called the flowers of life.
At first Zoal refused to help these beings, he only sought out to destroy other races for mere pleasure, but when the robotech masters told him about the power source these flowers of life provided, Zoal had second thoughts. The masters agreed to share the flowers with Zoal and his race if they would help protect them from the likes of the invid.
The Zyrians were involved in the first raid of the planet Optera, and it was successful but still a losing battle. At the time all the Zyrians had were special swords and armor, no powerful mechs had been invented then. The masters viewed the Zyrians as being too weak, and decided to use their new technology to clone a race of their own.
But of course the robotech masters didn't tell Zoal that he and his people were of no use, instead they lied and asked a favor of him. They asked if they could use some of his greatest warriors and clone them so they could create a powerful army for themselves. The warlord without thinking, granted them and the cloning program began. At first it didn't look like it was going to be very successful, but surprising enough it was, and thus the zentraedi were born.
And unlike the zyrians, they had battle pods and power suits to use against the enemy. But it didn't take long before Bhor started taking an interest in robotechnology, and he started constructing machines of his own.
Their design was intended to be a mockery of the invid mechs, but to be much more powerful and maneuverable. The colors of the machines were the same as their uniforms, black trimmed with red, and the zyrian emblem would be visible on its surface. At the time, no name had been given to the machines, instead the creator simply called them behemoths because of their monstrous appearance.
Special mechs were created for the use of the commanders, but were built to withstand heavy fire. In appearance they were very similar to the behemoth mechs, but armed with weaponry ten times more powerful. Another feature the officer pod possessed was the ability to appear invisible on radar. This meant that the standard mechs could act as a distraction towards the enemy, thus leaving them a sitting duck for the officer to finish. The name for such a powerful machine was Leviathan, and Zoal was the one who chose the name. Of course he still favored his sword and kept it at his side in case of close encounters, but he did favor this new power.
He did lose interest in robotechnology after some time, when he discovered he and his people had been used by the robotech masters. Angered Zoal threatened to burn all the flowers of life and behead the masters in honor of hauruta. This created panic, and if that wasn't bad enough, the threat of the invid was also at large. The masters now faced two enemies, and in order to provide greater protection, they had their entire race of clones increased to the size of giants, through the use of protoculture. By the time their experiment was complete, the Zyrian mother ship had already left the scene. It had been chasing after a colony of invid which had left their home planet in search of another. This long journal led the Zyrians to an unknown planet, deep in the universe. They found out soon, that this planet was also inhabited by a race of blue skinned humanoid figures called the anoeamians or blue ghosts. As their bodies seemed to emit some type of eerie glow, giving them a ghost like appearance.
It was said that the anoeamians and invid were long time enemies, that had been fighting over the planet for ages. And the reason for this never ending battle was due to the fact that the invid discovered their precious flowers of life could in fact survive in the environment of this new world. But the anoeamians weren't about to perish and let the invid take over their home, and so they fought back, but found that they were weak. This was when the king constructed a large powerful platform, equipped with nuclear explosives, powerful enough to wipe out a good portion of the universe if given the right amount of power. This weapon system had been created for the sole purpose of destroying the invid, but the king had no idea how to control it. It's source of power was their own blood, as they possessed the ability to levitate, and control objects with their minds. This weapon system was named the zergyx, and when the invid arrived for the final showdown, it was activated. It worked as planned, but not only did it destroy the invid, but half of their planet as well, taking the lives of millions.
This great power is what Zoal witnessed, and he became instantly obsessed with obtaining this weapon. However, due to the devastating results, the king had decided that the zergyx was far too powerful for the likes of anyone, and ordered to have it ejected into space, where it would never be found. But at that same time, the Zyrians had pulled out their swords and invaded the planet. Zoal found the king and queen and demanded that he hand the zergyx over to him. The king refused and tried to tell him that it's far too dangerous for anyone, but being the ignorant, greedy monster he was, Zoal still wanted it. He knew that with power that great in his hands, all life in the universe would fear him. The king still refused and it angered Zoal to the point he decapitated the king, and stabbed the queen in the back. Their daughter and princess, Xxionia wept over their deaths, and waited for Zoal to finish her off too.
But instead, he decided to keep her alive, so that he could use her to activate the zergyx at his will. Xxionia was taken from her home and forced to watch the rest of the holocaust of her people. But before Zoal could snag the weapon system, two remaining survivors launched it off the planet. A chunk of the planet broke away from the surface, carrying the weapon system deep within it. Zoal and his people tried to hurry in order to catch it, but they were too late.
It had already disappeared and no matter how hard they tried, they could not track it, it had vanished without a trace, but only it's shell would be discovered by the humans and so would the founding of the great city of Atlantis.
But despite the fact it had vanished, that never stopped the zyrians from searching for it, and it would only be a matter of time before they would finally pinpoint its location, but only to discover a new but familiar threat.
Characters and descriptions
Zoal -
The head commander and ruler of the zyrian race. He is without a doubt one of the most twisted and maniacal beings in the universe. He is also a strong warrior, but a brutal killer, which is why he became the leader of the race due to the fact he was feared by others. One of the reasons for Zoal's hatred is because of what his brother became, in his eyes a traitor. He chose a mortal life on the planet earth and abandoned his people completely. But was Krotez a traitor or could it be that Zoal was jealous, and disguised it with anger? That is something Bhor actually believes, but wouldn't dare confront him, in fear of coming face to face with his blade.
Zoal does have a short temper, and will not tolerate anything, and he is also power hungry, in which he wishes to be feared by all in the universe, that is after he can get his hands on the zergyx.
Bhor-
Ranked second commander under Zoal, and also a personal advisor and expert. Bhor is unlike anyone else of his race, he is more aware of his surroundings and also yearns to learn as much as he can. He was the first zyrian to construct and build a series of mechs for use in battle. He took a great interest in the new founded robotechnology and decided to be test his abilities. Unlike most of his people, he has no desire to conquer and steal, nor is he obsessed with the so called valuables. Instead he sees knowledge and technology as a greater value, but of course he keeps such opinions to himself. Bhor also views the zergyx as a waste of time, he knows what it is capable of, and would rather not see it in the hands of Zoal, mainly because he wouldn't know how to control it.
Arzel -
Head commander of the female half of the race, mainly because there exists no equality between the sexes. The men see the women as being weak compared to them and vice versa, although their forces are combined. Once a proud owner of long hair, Arzel's ego got the best of her, and during one the battles she failed to prove herself worthy. And for her punishment, Zoal took his sword and chopped off her hair. Arzel was stunned and fell to her knees in a pathetic fashion, whining over the loss of her precious locks, and forever holding a grudge against him. In their culture if a woman had short hair, it was a sign of betrayal, but Arzel was already in a world of hurt because she had already consumed the herb and because of her immortality, her hair would never grow back.
Over time, she accepted her new appearance, and had even gotten used to it, but that would not change her attitude towards Zoal, or the fact the blade marks are still visible.
Kronus - One of Zoal's highly favored warriors, who also acts as a guard. The reason behind Zoal favoring Kronus is unknown, but Bhor suspects it is because Kronus is so much like Zoal, in personality and strength, so he must see himself in this warrior. Or maybe it could be that Kronus reminds Zoal of his brother, before he betrayed him, but whatever the reason, Kronus is the only one Zoal truly counts on in battle, he could care less for the rest.
Kahn & Ahtor - These two warriors serve under the command of Bhor, they are his own personal minions. But sadly they aren't as intelligent as they look, in fact they are rather clueless, and since they are always seen together, it is thought to be that they might be brothers, or even loyal companions.
Wether Bhor favors these two is unknown, but some evidence might point to the truth, because Bhor selects them out of the entire race, to act as spies. But then again, he could of also chosen them, to rid himself of them.
Nepheria & Morphilia - They are sisters, and also two of Arzel's highly valued warriors. They fight side by side in battle, and also look out for one another. Nepheria is the oldest, and toughest, but the most stubborn, her sister is the one who keeps her in check. Morphilia may not be as strong, but she is a violent fighter, and would gladly sacrifice herself to protect her sister from harm. Both of them have a large ego, and strive to impress their commander, which often leads to taking out their own people just to take the credit.
Xxionia - An alien princess that is the last of her kind, she was kidnapped by Zoal and the zyrian race because only her blood can activate the zergyx. As a prisoner she is tortured by the horrifying memory of watching her parents and people die. She is either stored in a chamber and frozen, or kept in the ship's chamber with her feet cuffed to the wall. All she has to remember her parents by is a mysterious red amulet she wears around her neck. Her mother once told her, that if she were ever in any danger, to use it to call for help, because someone would answer. Ever since then, Xxionia has kept the amulet close to her heart, and tries to figure out how to use it. She soon discovers that the trick to using it is just to focus her mind on it, and once she starts doing this she actually makes a connection with someone, although it's someone she's never seen before in her life.
As some of you know, I've been working on robotech fan project. Much of the designs and web site are finished, but not completely. The story is called Atlantech, or (code name Robotech 4000). Why not just Robotech 4000 you ask? Well because in this time and age, Robotechnology has lost its value, because of a brand new type of technology that's been developed and founded in the futuristic city of Atlantis.
But despite the fact it has a different title, it still remains true to the Robotech story-line, and the same elements apply. Even some of the new characters are descendants from Robotech characters, like William and Alley Sterling. Of course there are others, but I'm not going to reveal them, in fact I find it fun to leave readers guessing.
The story takes place in the year 4000, and why not 3000? Because it's already been done, but never finished, just like many other robotech projects.
Unlike the usual fan fiction, I decided to create my own universe and unique characters, because what better way to tell a story than to be able to create your own world for it? Sure it's fun writing stories about your favorite characters, but it just feels more rewarding coming up with your own.
Before the development of the characters, I wanted a setting that would not only be futuristic, but unlike anything seen in the RT universe. For the idea I thought to myself, what would a city in that time period look like? Then it came to me while browsing through pictures of Las Vegas, why not a city of neon lights, and super advanced technology? A city as large as New York City, but with the appearance of Las Vegas. I got even more ideas, when deciding on the location of such a city. It would have to be located somewhere deep in space, far from the sun and earth, because it is literally, the city that never sleeps, because it never sees daylight.
Next came the proposal of its exact location, it couldn't just be drifting in space could it? It would have to be supported by something. Of course at the same time I was coming up with the idea of what would be called the "Zergyx". Which can be defined as a secret ancient alien weapon, with the same value the SDF-1. The story line that fits around the proposed weapon, described it as being launched and sent away from its planet of origin, but remaining encased in its shell, which is a chunk of that planet. And so to make the storyline even more interesting, I decided the location of the city would have to be the shell of the zergyx, but no one would know the weapon system was buried deep within it.
Doing it this way, would also help with the introduction of an ancient race of aliens, called the Zyrians. (Ancient ancestors of the zentraedi). Because their main leader is obsessed with obtaining the zergyx and when he finally discovers its location, he is angered and starts to believe the population of Atlantis City are keeping it for themselves.
But of course the aliens are one of the main villains, but so are some of the very people of Atlantis city, which are also it's founders, The city council. Why would a city council fall into the category of villainy you ask? Well, because they are a group of greedy middle aged men, who have complete control over everything in the city, except the military which is what angers them. The head council man, Julius Morane is the real problem, especially because of all the crime that takes place behind the backs of the civilians. He lies and steals from the people, and they don't know about it, but if they ever find out, they are either bribed with money to keep their mouths shut or if they refuse, they are killed.
The council still try to take control over the military, they even fund it's supplies and the top secret mecha, but still the Admiral refuses to hand that power over to them, because he's known Julius for a long time and also knows he's up to no good. Captain Abraham Grant, and the city council, have a long history of hatred towards one another, and it all started in the early development of the city, when Grant was running for the position of Mayor, and Julius saw to it, that he would lose the election. So after losing, Grant joined the military and earned the rank of admiral, just to spite his foe. Grant knew that the council wanted control over the AMF, and he knew that joining meant they no longer had control over him.
But sadly that didn't stop the council, in fact they decided to insert a spy amongst the AMF, and not just any spy, but a robot disguised as a human, which would be known as Stan Winston. Using a holographic overlay similar to that of the android Janice, Stan would be able to walk amongst the soldiers and personnel of the AMF, secretly recording everything that took place.
But of course acting as a spy wasn't the only purpose of the android, he was also in charge of keeping the councils secrets private, and eliminating anyone who knew anything about it.
what better killer than an android? He could take care of the council's dirty work, without ever being caught. Leaving behind no trace of evidence, making the murders look like accidents or acts of suicide. In a sense, he is in fact the perfect killing machine, but still harbors a personality all his own. And rumor has it, that he was created by using the remains of a computer, combined with actual memories of a human being.
In fact, that human was the actual son of Julius, that had died due to an incurable cancer many years ago. Julius refused to let his son die, and so he had his memories wiped from his brain and transferred into the body of an android. But of course this only a rumor, there is no actual proof that this occurred, as the robot does not act like his son, or in any way, react to such memories and so Stan's true origins remain nothing more than a mystery.
Characters and descriptions
Creating your own characters is always a fun experience, because you can do so much with them, there are no limitations, but it is important to make them realistic. Because no one likes to read about a Mary sue.
the first and main character of the story is eighteen year old Brian Smith. He is an unusual character, because of a terrible depression he faces, that was caused by the loss of his older brother, Robert. Robert had joined the AMF and became a test pilot, and everything had been fine until one night he never returned home, and all Brian had heard was that he was killed due to a malfunction of one of the fighter planes. At the time, Brian was only eleven years old, and his dreams were shattered because his brother had been his role model, but after losing him Brian felt like he lost everything. Also spawned, Brian's hatred towards the military, (Lynn Kyle comes to mind) He blamed them for what happened to his brother and swore he would never join their forces, no matter what. Sadly Brian dug himself into a hole, where he refused to talk to anyone, or try to make friends, but he did still attend public attractions, mainly night clubs and a local bar called The Card Shack; where poker games were held, as he likes to listen to the music and watch people gamble.
However, he does finally meet a friend, who turns out to be none other than William sterling. And they meet at the card shack during one of the live performances by a famous prima-donna, Victoria Thompson. Brian also meets Stan Winston, but they don't seem to like one another, and Brian finds it odd that Stan has a striking resemblance to his dead brother.
Moving on, the second main character is William sterling, and yes he is related to Max and Miriya. He's older than Brian by a couple of years, and also a soldier of the AMF, which Brian doesn't seem to hold against him when they meet. He is ranked as a corporal, but surprising enough, isn't the best pilot on the forces as expected to be. Someone much younger and unexpected is, and that would be Justin Church. Being that William doesn't live up to the sterling name, he is still a great pilot and proud of himself. Personality wise, he is very sentimental, humorous, and charming (gets it from max)
Miss Victoria Thompson is the object of his affection, and he acts as her secret admirer by leaving vases of roses anonymously at her dressing room door. He also tries to get her attention often, by making eye contact and showing up for big events where she attends, one in particular a poker tournament. He knows she's fond of watching such games, and so he tries to win her over by playing against the champs. He is, how shall I put this? A hopeless romantic, but lady luck does indeed pay him a visit.
Next character, none other than Stan Winston, the android in disguise. Ever since he was inserted into the AMF, he started tagging along with William sterling, and for some reason, became attached to him. Being that Stan's true nature is to act as a spy and a killer, it's strange that he would establish any humane bond with anyone, especially an enemy of the council. But Stan has become William's best friend, and fears him ever finding out the truth of what he really is. However, upon meeting Brian, Stan instantly sees him as a threat, and plans to deal with him later on.
Moving on to the next character, we have the vamp and diva, Victoria Thompson. She's not your average blonde, she is full of character and plenty of sass. But the most unique thing about this character is her 1920's look. As a long time fancier of old styles, she favors the jazz age the most, and tries to make it her own style. She is one of the most popular icons in Atlantis city, only second to another diva, Natoya Stronghold, but she knows more about what goes on in the city than anyone else. She knows everything because she used to have an affair with Julius, but since it ended, that still didn't stop him from exploiting her to make money or end his obsession with her for that matter. She was bribed into getting anything she wanted, if she only remained silent, and she agreed. Working as an actress for silent films and also a musical career, she has hopes in saving up to buy her own pub and call it Gatsby after her favorite book. But despite her fame and success, she still feels lonely as she tells her manager often, and drinks to fill that void. She also wonders who keeps leaving her roses, and why they never come forward, as a matter of fact she tries to find out who that secret admirer is.
Second Part
Continued...
The next character on the list is Justin Church. He is by far one of the youngest soldiers in the AMF, but also one of the best pilots. His amazing skills even bypass corporal William Sterling's, which is very impressive if one might say. But young Justin also has another side to him, he's much more interested in science than the military, and in fact the only reason he had joined is because he wanted to make his father proud. Justin's father knew of his love for knowledge, but insisted that he join the military to make something of his life.
Without arguing, Justin had accepted his father's wishes and set out to fulfill his dream, but that didn't stop the young man from doing what he loved.
The AMF had a secret lab of their own, and without his father knowing, Justin also begun working with other scientists.
I guess you could say Justin's true role model was none other than Emil Lang, and he strives to become a brilliant scientist one day. But aside from his hobbies, he is pretty much a normal young man, who enjoys the company of William and Brian. But the only problem is he believes there is a scientific explanation for everything, especially when Brian begins having reoccurring nightmares and visions. Justin assumes that is nothing but a psychological problem, without considering that it might be something more than that. Justin is also the first person to suspect Stan Winston of abnormalities, as he starts watching him closely, observing his behavior.
One of the main reasons for his suspicions, is because he actually discovers something odd, a small drop of fluid left behind on a table, where Stan had been sitting.
Next character is Lynne Williams, a tough redhead and strict commander. Only ranked second under the command of Admiral Grant, Lynne proves herself worthy, by taking her missions seriously. She is the type of commander, who will not put up with insubordination or any jokes for that matter. Being a woman, she knows the men really have no respect towards her authority, therefore she usually beats them in hand-to-hand combat, which embarrasses them greatly. She also has to deal with the bridge crew, who don't normally take their positions seriously and tend to gossip or fool around. But aside from her toughness, there is a softer caring side to the female officer, a side many don't often see. She has a strong relationship with captain Grant, a kind of a father/daughter bond. She is also good friends with William sterling and Justin, but sees Brian as being a weak individual with no motivation.
Like Justin, she also begins getting suspicious of Stan, especially when she catches him in her office without her permission.
moving on, the next character is Captain Abraham Grant. I've already explained how he got to where he is now, but what I haven't talked about is what he's like as a person.
He isn't as tough or strict as Lynne, but he does commend her for that, instead he actually tolerates what she doesn't, which is something she often questions. But he believes that every person is quite capable of realizing their mistakes and disciplining themselves. But of course that doesn't mean he won't give them a fair warning, because he knows a lot of the soldiers don't take it seriously, only because they do not see war......yet.
Grant also faces the everyday ridicule by head council man, Julius Morane, but no matter what the man says, Grant knows deep inside he's just angry because he doesn't get the same amount of respect, but then again who would respect a liar?
Other characters
Julius Morane - Doesn't often make an appearance but his word is law, if living in the city of Atlantis. He and the rest of the council own and control everything except the AMF which had been around long before their council was founded. The AMF is something Julius wishes to gain control of, but unfortunately he can't as long as Grant is in charge. However, when Julius and the council are seen, their faces are hidden in the shadows, but no one knows why.
Maxwell Graham - He is mostly known for his position of being Victoria's manager, but is also involved in other businesses. He is usually seen at the card shack, where he hosts many of the games, and is even said to be a cheater.
Natoya Stronghold - Yet another diva of Atlantis city, and by far the most popular, out of the thousands of artists that reside there. She is much older than Victoria, and has her own unique style, which is very up to date with their times. Her hair is naturally brunette, but she wears a short styled violet wig as her trademark. Another unique feature about the woman is her french accent, which many fan's seem to adore. It was even said, that Natoya was the artist that inspired Victoria in the first place.
Alley Sterling - The blonde younger sister of William Sterling, and one of the bridge officers of the AMF. She stands out from the rest as being grumpy, sarcastic and careless, but she does take her job seriously and has a lot of respect for Lynne.
That covers most of the characters of Atlantis City, now moving onto the aliens.
Part III
As I've said before, the Zyrians are an ancient race, dating back to the times of ancient Egypt on planet earth. They are what you might call Space Pirates, simply because after conquering/ destroying their enemies they steal anything they deem valuable such as gold or jewels. They even wear some of these treasures as a symbol of honor. Out of everything they've ever discovered in the universe, gold is the most valuable in their culture and they wear necklaces and earrings made out of it. Most of the gold they have was actually given to them by the ancient Egyptians, when they came upon earth by mistake.
The leader and ruler of the Zyrians, Zoal was worshipped as a god, in fact the entire race were thought to be god like beings, sent from above to help them.
At first Zoal had intentions of slaying the humans, but being that they bowed before him, he decided against it. He would wait until he had gotten everything he wanted from them, and then he would kill them all. Zoal's brother Krotez was against him, and tried to persuade him to leave the humans alone, but all Zoal could see was his brother acting like a traitor. The warlord had respect for his sibling, but still never got over the anger, and to make things worse his brother asked for permission to stay on earth. Careless, Zoal granted his brother's foolish request and watched as he became a pharaoh and started living a mortal life.
The Zyrians are immortal beings, but only by accident, you see long ago they discovered an herb and they heard it was said to have special powers, but those powers were never revealed.
The herb was ground up into a liquid where Zoal and his people drank it, but they never experienced anything powerful about the substance. Then Zoal was led to believe it had been nothing more than lies and he ordered to have the aliens of that planet, eliminated.
But as the years passed, Zoal and his people began to notice they hadn't aged in a long time. Zoal's second commander and personal advisor, Bhor had also been an expert on all things in the universe and it was he who discovered the drink had actually stopped the aging process, thus making them immortal beings.
Aside from being worshipped, the zyrians also had their own god like figure they believed was responsible for all their victories and anything else rewarding. Zoal was the one who started this bizarre act of religion, and it happened long ago during the invasion of a small distant planet. The warlord had fallen, nearly facing defeat when suddenly he heard a voice in his head and it caused him to go insane, and he killed everyone in his way, even his own people. He claimed this voice he heard, to be the voice of their god, and he called it Hauruta, which means victory in the zyrianic language.
It wasn't long before this religion became so popular, that they even built a temple in the god's honor on their home planet.
The temple was made out of the rest of the gold, they had stolen from earth, and the inside was decorated with treasures taken from all across the universe.
The temple was also sacred, and very few could enter it unless granted permission by Zoal.
After the birth of such a god, the entire race began to wear war paint (eyeliner) around their eyes. They had actually gotten the idea from coming into contact with the Egyptians, but only wore it due to the fact it made them look more terrifying to their enemies, which would be the robotech masters, when they were first discovered.
At the time they were discovered, the masters were looking for an alien race to help them in a fight against an alien race known as the invid and also help them obtain some unknown plants called the flowers of life.
At first Zoal refused to help these beings, he only sought out to destroy other races for mere pleasure, but when the robotech masters told him about the power source these flowers of life provided, Zoal had second thoughts. The masters agreed to share the flowers with Zoal and his race if they would help protect them from the likes of the invid.
The Zyrians were involved in the first raid of the planet Optera, and it was successful but still a losing battle. At the time all the Zyrians had were special swords and armor, no powerful mechs had been invented then. The masters viewed the Zyrians as being too weak, and decided to use their new technology to clone a race of their own.
But of course the robotech masters didn't tell Zoal that he and his people were of no use, instead they lied and asked a favor of him. They asked if they could use some of his greatest warriors and clone them so they could create a powerful army for themselves. The warlord without thinking, granted them and the cloning program began. At first it didn't look like it was going to be very successful, but surprising enough it was, and thus the zentraedi were born.
And unlike the zyrians, they had battle pods and power suits to use against the enemy. But it didn't take long before Bhor started taking an interest in robotechnology, and he started constructing machines of his own.
Their design was intended to be a mockery of the invid mechs, but to be much more powerful and maneuverable. The colors of the machines were the same as their uniforms, black trimmed with red, and the zyrian emblem would be visible on its surface. At the time, no name had been given to the machines, instead the creator simply called them behemoths because of their monstrous appearance.
Special mechs were created for the use of the commanders, but were built to withstand heavy fire. In appearance they were very similar to the behemoth mechs, but armed with weaponry ten times more powerful. Another feature the officer pod possessed was the ability to appear invisible on radar. This meant that the standard mechs could act as a distraction towards the enemy, thus leaving them a sitting duck for the officer to finish. The name for such a powerful machine was Leviathan, and Zoal was the one who chose the name. Of course he still favored his sword and kept it at his side in case of close encounters, but he did favor this new power.
He did lose interest in robotechnology after some time, when he discovered he and his people had been used by the robotech masters. Angered Zoal threatened to burn all the flowers of life and behead the masters in honor of hauruta. This created panic, and if that wasn't bad enough, the threat of the invid was also at large. The masters now faced two enemies, and in order to provide greater protection, they had their entire race of clones increased to the size of giants, through the use of protoculture. By the time their experiment was complete, the Zyrian mother ship had already left the scene. It had been chasing after a colony of invid which had left their home planet in search of another. This long journal led the Zyrians to an unknown planet, deep in the universe. They found out soon, that this planet was also inhabited by a race of blue skinned humanoid figures called the anoeamians or blue ghosts. As their bodies seemed to emit some type of eerie glow, giving them a ghost like appearance.
It was said that the anoeamians and invid were long time enemies, that had been fighting over the planet for ages. And the reason for this never ending battle was due to the fact that the invid discovered their precious flowers of life could in fact survive in the environment of this new world. But the anoeamians weren't about to perish and let the invid take over their home, and so they fought back, but found that they were weak. This was when the king constructed a large powerful platform, equipped with nuclear explosives, powerful enough to wipe out a good portion of the universe if given the right amount of power. This weapon system had been created for the sole purpose of destroying the invid, but the king had no idea how to control it. It's source of power was their own blood, as they possessed the ability to levitate, and control objects with their minds. This weapon system was named the zergyx, and when the invid arrived for the final showdown, it was activated. It worked as planned, but not only did it destroy the invid, but half of their planet as well, taking the lives of millions.
This great power is what Zoal witnessed, and he became instantly obsessed with obtaining this weapon. However, due to the devastating results, the king had decided that the zergyx was far too powerful for the likes of anyone, and ordered to have it ejected into space, where it would never be found. But at that same time, the Zyrians had pulled out their swords and invaded the planet. Zoal found the king and queen and demanded that he hand the zergyx over to him. The king refused and tried to tell him that it's far too dangerous for anyone, but being the ignorant, greedy monster he was, Zoal still wanted it. He knew that with power that great in his hands, all life in the universe would fear him. The king still refused and it angered Zoal to the point he decapitated the king, and stabbed the queen in the back. Their daughter and princess, Xxionia wept over their deaths, and waited for Zoal to finish her off too.
But instead, he decided to keep her alive, so that he could use her to activate the zergyx at his will. Xxionia was taken from her home and forced to watch the rest of the holocaust of her people. But before Zoal could snag the weapon system, two remaining survivors launched it off the planet. A chunk of the planet broke away from the surface, carrying the weapon system deep within it. Zoal and his people tried to hurry in order to catch it, but they were too late.
It had already disappeared and no matter how hard they tried, they could not track it, it had vanished without a trace, but only it's shell would be discovered by the humans and so would the founding of the great city of Atlantis.
But despite the fact it had vanished, that never stopped the zyrians from searching for it, and it would only be a matter of time before they would finally pinpoint its location, but only to discover a new but familiar threat.
Characters and descriptions
Zoal -
The head commander and ruler of the zyrian race. He is without a doubt one of the most twisted and maniacal beings in the universe. He is also a strong warrior, but a brutal killer, which is why he became the leader of the race due to the fact he was feared by others. One of the reasons for Zoal's hatred is because of what his brother became, in his eyes a traitor. He chose a mortal life on the planet earth and abandoned his people completely. But was Krotez a traitor or could it be that Zoal was jealous, and disguised it with anger? That is something Bhor actually believes, but wouldn't dare confront him, in fear of coming face to face with his blade.
Zoal does have a short temper, and will not tolerate anything, and he is also power hungry, in which he wishes to be feared by all in the universe, that is after he can get his hands on the zergyx.
Bhor-
Ranked second commander under Zoal, and also a personal advisor and expert. Bhor is unlike anyone else of his race, he is more aware of his surroundings and also yearns to learn as much as he can. He was the first zyrian to construct and build a series of mechs for use in battle. He took a great interest in the new founded robotechnology and decided to be test his abilities. Unlike most of his people, he has no desire to conquer and steal, nor is he obsessed with the so called valuables. Instead he sees knowledge and technology as a greater value, but of course he keeps such opinions to himself. Bhor also views the zergyx as a waste of time, he knows what it is capable of, and would rather not see it in the hands of Zoal, mainly because he wouldn't know how to control it.
Arzel -
Head commander of the female half of the race, mainly because there exists no equality between the sexes. The men see the women as being weak compared to them and vice versa, although their forces are combined. Once a proud owner of long hair, Arzel's ego got the best of her, and during one the battles she failed to prove herself worthy. And for her punishment, Zoal took his sword and chopped off her hair. Arzel was stunned and fell to her knees in a pathetic fashion, whining over the loss of her precious locks, and forever holding a grudge against him. In their culture if a woman had short hair, it was a sign of betrayal, but Arzel was already in a world of hurt because she had already consumed the herb and because of her immortality, her hair would never grow back.
Over time, she accepted her new appearance, and had even gotten used to it, but that would not change her attitude towards Zoal, or the fact the blade marks are still visible.
Kronus - One of Zoal's highly favored warriors, who also acts as a guard. The reason behind Zoal favoring Kronus is unknown, but Bhor suspects it is because Kronus is so much like Zoal, in personality and strength, so he must see himself in this warrior. Or maybe it could be that Kronus reminds Zoal of his brother, before he betrayed him, but whatever the reason, Kronus is the only one Zoal truly counts on in battle, he could care less for the rest.
Kahn & Ahtor - These two warriors serve under the command of Bhor, they are his own personal minions. But sadly they aren't as intelligent as they look, in fact they are rather clueless, and since they are always seen together, it is thought to be that they might be brothers, or even loyal companions.
Wether Bhor favors these two is unknown, but some evidence might point to the truth, because Bhor selects them out of the entire race, to act as spies. But then again, he could of also chosen them, to rid himself of them.
Nepheria & Morphilia - They are sisters, and also two of Arzel's highly valued warriors. They fight side by side in battle, and also look out for one another. Nepheria is the oldest, and toughest, but the most stubborn, her sister is the one who keeps her in check. Morphilia may not be as strong, but she is a violent fighter, and would gladly sacrifice herself to protect her sister from harm. Both of them have a large ego, and strive to impress their commander, which often leads to taking out their own people just to take the credit.
Xxionia - An alien princess that is the last of her kind, she was kidnapped by Zoal and the zyrian race because only her blood can activate the zergyx. As a prisoner she is tortured by the horrifying memory of watching her parents and people die. She is either stored in a chamber and frozen, or kept in the ship's chamber with her feet cuffed to the wall. All she has to remember her parents by is a mysterious red amulet she wears around her neck. Her mother once told her, that if she were ever in any danger, to use it to call for help, because someone would answer. Ever since then, Xxionia has kept the amulet close to her heart, and tries to figure out how to use it. She soon discovers that the trick to using it is just to focus her mind on it, and once she starts doing this she actually makes a connection with someone, although it's someone she's never seen before in her life.
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Just finished a recent picture even with life being kinda hectic I made time to work on it. I kinda went for a pop-art/classy style this time, while experimenting with different textures and patterns.
The characters included in this painting are, Victoria, Maxwell, William and Brian. I would of included more but I couldn't figure out where I wanted them, another character that was planned for this picture was Justin, I even had the sketch, but after looking over it, I figured just William and Brian would work.
For maxwell's vest,I used a pattern fill, I had to find one that looked classy to fit his character. I like how it turned out, and I'll probably do something similar in future projects.
However he is the only one with a pattern for clothing, the others are just painted.
Victoria is wearing her so-called trademark gold dress, I don't know what it is, but I love that dress. It's the perfect lounge singer ensemble, not to mention its very classy. Also gotta love her expression, I didn't think much of it then but now that I pay attention she reminds me a lot of Clara Bow, especially the eyes and lips, but her personality is somewhere between the line of Mae West and Marilyn Monroe.
Justin Church was supposed to be pictured with William and Brian but I felt since Brian and Justin don't become friends till later, that I would leave that for a later project.
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AMF Bridge Officers
Grace Hanes
age: 27
Height: 5'9
Weight: 128 lbs
Hair: Red
Eyes: olive
rank: bridge officer
The oldest and tallest of the bridge crew, grace is a very dedicated woman and is also a very stylish gal outside of her work. She really admires commander Lynne Williams, and tries her best to impress her and Admiral Grant. Though she isn't very flirtatious and hyper like Lucy and Mipsy, she still manages to gawk at men when given the opportunity.
Lucy Ann
age: 25
Height: 5'6
Weight: 120
Hair: Black
Eyes: Brown
rank: bridge officer
Lucy is the most hyperactive of the bridge crew, thus earning the nickname "Ann pistol ".
She is quick when it comes to responding to her command station, and also quick when it comes to gossip. Despite her annoying tendencies, she is a very sweet young woman, and also shares a sense of style with the current Atlantis city fashion. Lucy is however, the only officer Lynne seems to get agitated with, and they never seem to see eye to eye.
Mipsy Taylor
age: 22
Height: 5'7
Weight: 126 lbs
Hair: Light Brown
Eyes: Blue
rank: bridge officer
Mipsy is usually quiet and shy, but when around Lucy she seems to switch personalities, and comes off as being just as crazy and hyper-active. She is also called "sue", which happens to be her middle name, and often goes by the name of "Mipsy Sue".
She tries to come off as being just as hard working as Grace, but her short attention span
always seems to get the best of her.
Alley Sterling
age: 18
Height: 5'8
Weight: 130 lbs
Hair: Blonde
Eyes: Brown
rank: bridge officer
The youngest of the bridge crew and also the sister of William, Alley is very different from the rest. She isn't hard working at all, in fact she hates her position and likes to fool around with her computer rather than paying attention to her surroundings.
Though she cannot stand the other members, she tolerates them and likes to start nasty rumors about her brother's well being. Outside of her job she seems to come off as a sarcastic, ill-mannered person who likes more than nothing to laugh at the misfortune of others.
AMF Bridge Officers
Grace Hanes
age: 27
Height: 5'9
Weight: 128 lbs
Hair: Red
Eyes: olive
rank: bridge officer
The oldest and tallest of the bridge crew, grace is a very dedicated woman and is also a very stylish gal outside of her work. She really admires commander Lynne Williams, and tries her best to impress her and Admiral Grant. Though she isn't very flirtatious and hyper like Lucy and Mipsy, she still manages to gawk at men when given the opportunity.
Lucy Ann
age: 25
Height: 5'6
Weight: 120
Hair: Black
Eyes: Brown
rank: bridge officer
Lucy is the most hyperactive of the bridge crew, thus earning the nickname "Ann pistol ".
She is quick when it comes to responding to her command station, and also quick when it comes to gossip. Despite her annoying tendencies, she is a very sweet young woman, and also shares a sense of style with the current Atlantis city fashion. Lucy is however, the only officer Lynne seems to get agitated with, and they never seem to see eye to eye.
Mipsy Taylor
age: 22
Height: 5'7
Weight: 126 lbs
Hair: Light Brown
Eyes: Blue
rank: bridge officer
Mipsy is usually quiet and shy, but when around Lucy she seems to switch personalities, and comes off as being just as crazy and hyper-active. She is also called "sue", which happens to be her middle name, and often goes by the name of "Mipsy Sue".
She tries to come off as being just as hard working as Grace, but her short attention span
always seems to get the best of her.
Alley Sterling
age: 18
Height: 5'8
Weight: 130 lbs
Hair: Blonde
Eyes: Brown
rank: bridge officer
The youngest of the bridge crew and also the sister of William, Alley is very different from the rest. She isn't hard working at all, in fact she hates her position and likes to fool around with her computer rather than paying attention to her surroundings.
Though she cannot stand the other members, she tolerates them and likes to start nasty rumors about her brother's well being. Outside of her job she seems to come off as a sarcastic, ill-mannered person who likes more than nothing to laugh at the misfortune of others.
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